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RE: Write in micro size || I write from different perspectives ||SLC Season 21 || 2nd Week

Hello dearest writer,

It’s great to see how story and letter intertwine with deep reflections on life's struggles, from the helplessness of the ant to the wisdom shared by its friend and the final tribute. Your narrative captures the essence of resilience and the acceptance of life's inevitable challenges.

Your writings are emotionally powerful, however the perspectives and contexts could be clearer. In the first story, the ant is trapped and scared, but the second story's letter to the distressed ant lacks clarity on who is writing it and why. The shift from a personal reflection to an outsider's commentary makes it confusing. In the third story, the tribute to the ant doesn't fully adopt the third-person perspective as expected.

Best of luck. Way to go...

#microwrite02 @joslud @solperez

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