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RE: Technology In The Healthcare Industry- Crypto Academy Season Four Week Three- Homework Post For @yohan2on.
Hi @farhmade
Thanks for participating in the Steemit Crypto Academy
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Rating criteria | Calculation out of 2 |
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Quality of presentation | 1/2 |
Originality | 1/2 |
Compliance with topic | 1/2 |
Clarity of language | 1/2 |
Quality of analysis | 1/2 |
Grand total | 5 |
This is average content. Your article was still lacking in content. There was no in-depth analysis of information regarding the potential applications of Blockchain in the Health care industry.
You also had plenty of typing errors in your work. I advise you to learn how to use Grammarly to quickly spot and rectify such errors in your work. Kindly put more effort into your work.
Total| 5/10