A lovestory with no love

in Venezolanos Steem2 months ago (edited)
The woman you see standing here is my old friend. She is extremely sad but she wants to tell her story in her own words.

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"Today I am standing here thinking that my beautiful true love, marriage, trust, and relationship were true. Then why did this happen to me? I have been thinking a lot about love, marriage, trust, and relationships, so finally, I decided to put my point of view!

My circumstances made me put my point of view, but tell me, are you one of those people who feel marriage is nothing but a physical relationship? No, I don't think anyone would believe that! For me, love is the most beautiful feeling in the world.

Love is indeed a beautiful feeling. Love cannot be expressed in words. It can only be felt. Countless pieces of literature have been written on the feeling of love, and still counting.

Love is not limited to the love between a man and a woman, it exists around you, me, and everyone. It just has different forms. The feelings are different. The feeling of every form of love has the same meaning, to make the heart, mind, and even every hair of the body tingle with joy. This feeling is the main basis of these relationships. Friendship is also a relationship of love.

The beauty of love is that the word itself evokes good feelings in the body. These hormones make us happy, and they fill our body with positive energy, Love gives freedom from negative thoughts. So why is my love not doing the same? Even violent animals are controlled by love, and this is the beautiful feeling of love.

I agree that many people in this world do not consider love for them because they have seen many hearts breaking! True. I agree with this because even today I am one of them.

Most people think that marriage is not just for having children, nothing else. Okay, I accept this, but he used to think that marriage has no other significance, it is just a physical relationship, with no feelings, and no meaning.

Maybe they are right... but what about love? For me, love is heaven and the most beautiful treasure, which did not go out of my heart and mind completely even after breaking up with him.

I think I am a woman who falls into this category. I met a man and fell in love with him. You will be surprised to know that we have nothing in common. His world was completely different, but I decided to marry him.

But his demands were much higher than my expectations. I later asked him why he took this decision, and what he said is not worth mentioning here. He said, "What he liked about me was my straightforwardness and the way he accepted that he drank, that he was not religious, and for him, women were only meant for sex. He was opposite to my lifestyle. He could not live a day without a physical relationship. That was love for him.

But I finally decided to give him a chance, "Why don't we look at things logically and from a different perspective? I am sure it will be something better, and we will be happy for the rest of our lives."

"She said yes, I wanted to get married in a traditional wedding dress, so I ordered a gown for myself, and everything was fixed, including the wedding date, but it was not our destiny."

She fell silent after saying this, but I wanted to know more. I had just returned from Mumbai yesterday and saw that she was still single. I knew that they broke up just a few weeks after getting married, but I didn't know the reason.

She told me the reason, "That evening we came back from a weekend, but that evening he was not the same as before. There was a possessive tone in his conversation, as if he was trying to assert his authority over me. He kissed me after dinner, but I felt he was doing it as a routine. I didn't feel love in that kiss, rather, I felt the smell of lust, so I decided to take a break."

I was looking at her face when she asked me. "Tell me, Dev, is a woman just a toy for a man after marriage? I thought love was the best and most beautiful thing."

She stopped at this point.

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I had no answer, but you can read my thoughts in this poem because I still love her, although I never told her about my feelings to her.

What if I still love her?

her beauty always amazed me,

but this beautiful relationship,

will always remain a mystery,

she held a place in my heart,

she always was my love,

but I never showed it to her.

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I invite my friends @okere-blessing @senehasa and @mehwish-almas to join this contest by @solperez

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i read a lot of history, which made me believe that from ancient times man considered himself a center of the universe for which this whole world was created. He takes women as a object as all the other creatures and things on this planet. even when this planet was ruled by patriarchal feminine, a man thought that "these were women who could give birth and can grow the crops becoz women know this hidden secret. It seemed that man didn't admit the skills of laddies. A lot of historical stuff corroborates my perspective.A male doesn't think that a woman is a similar or equal creature like him.

maybe it's in genes that a man treats women like this. the other character in your story is fictional, a prison in books only and rarely exists on this planet.

Thanks Dove for inviting me it is really an incredible read of the day, particularly poetry.You know very well how to pearl the words.

I am sure you read all the best books and added it all to your knowledge but then all the bestsellers are the ones which show others in low light or belittle them. By the way, you have not met even 10% of men who try to prove that women are always better than men and know the importance of multitasking.

Dear mehwish my young friend, I can assure you that men will soon come out of their superiority complex for their future and very existence. Thanks for your wise words.

We arw curious about "the lot" you read and how far back in time 'history' goes for you. Are you able to place yourself in the world of a caveman? Adifferent culture? An 80 year war period?

How easy it is to believe what we read. Who was it that penned down the history you read? Was it the one who experienced it, a poet, a scientist, someone with tunnel vision, a monk, apainter, someone who tried to highlight some topic?
Books are as true as all the words left behind on the world wide web. Historybooks are changed with every new generation.
It's hard to briden the horizon with our heads filled with information spread as the truth by state, schools, newspapers and social media.

Why people behave in the way they do has to do with gender, their roots, how they are raised, educated and life experiences.

That is your nature; you will never be able to convey your emotions directly to another person in your life. Poor dove.
Beautiful story and poem. Good luck in the contest.
Thank you very much for inviting me, surely I will participate it.

This is nothing but fiction so you can't judge me based on this story, no way!!! But that's right, I have never taken any initiative in my entire life, especially in matters like these. Your story is eagerly awaited.

Hey, I know it's just a fiction, and my approach is also a joke.

🤣 I love your answer 🤐

Love is a beautiful thing when you are at the right hand. Any man that takes a woman as toy shouldn't be called a man. Thanks for inviting me. Cheers

That's exactly the point! We have come a long way from those savage era when women were the victims but today they are better than their male folks and deserve better treatment.

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Excelente texto, amigo m,ío. Definitivamente, los contrarios se atraen; y en muchas relaciones de pareja: el amor y el desamor son una mezcla perfecta para durar toda la vida nadando entre sábanas de aguas turbulentas.

Me encantó leerte. Un abrazo.

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"Wow, what a powerful and emotional story! 💔👏 Your courage in sharing this vulnerable moment is truly inspiring. I'm so glad you felt comfortable enough to open up about your experiences. It takes a lot of strength to confront the complexities of love and relationships.

Your words remind me that love comes in many forms, and its expression can be just as beautiful as it is heartbreaking. 💕 Your poem at the end was especially touching, and I'm sure many Steemians will relate to the emotions you expressed there.

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There is nothing to worry about, this is a fictional story based on the prompt images provided by @solperez.

Bendecido día amiga, cuántas personas no han pasado por una mala situación por culpa de un ser que cuenta lo que no le conviene decir, por el simple echo de no poder aguantar esas ganas de ser importante por lo menos unos minutos

True, but every person with such intentions has the same fate. I wish people would learn the value of patience and behave more humanely.

 2 months ago 

Hay estereotipos y paradigmas que controlan la forma de actuar de las personas. Y debido a ella dejan salir de su vida, bellezas únicas e irrepetibles. Me pude sumergir en tu escritura. El poema, muy sincero.

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