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RE: Escribo desde distintas perspectivas/ I write from different perspectives

Dearest writer,

You have effectively used the three perspectives: the first-person account of the ant's struggle to survive in a dark hole, a second-person letter offering emotional support, and a third-person epitaph celebrating the ant's perseverance. The different points of view add emotional depth, showcasing themes of resilience, self-discovery, and compassion.

However, it would have been helpful to clarify the sender in the second text to create a more personal connection and streamline the letter for greater impact. Overall, the piece beautifully conveys messages of hope and determination.

I wish you the best of luck.

#microwrite02 @joslud @solperez

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Hola amigo, gracias por tu apoyo.
Me alegra que te haya gustado, los detalles ya están anotados para hacerlo mejor la proxima vez, gracias por las observaciones.
Saludos, te deseo mucho éxito.