Poem "Ups and Downs" by @davidfar

in Writing & Reviews3 years ago

Hi my friends, today I wrote a poem about someone I know and I decided to share it here with you my friends.

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I do not know how it happened
That you are stuck in this predicament
Falling into the depths of the ocean
I feel your pains and sad emotions
I also fell into the depths several times
Well, no one sees you but nevermind
Even they'll forget you like if you disappeared
But you have the energy inside you, do not fear
It will not be permanent loss, it's a bounce
Life is like a signal that has ups and downs
Some days you go down but then you go up
No matter how long it takes but look at the top
I know that you deserve the best
So you will reach it and feel blessed


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Have a good day and night!

@davidfar

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 3 years ago 

Very creative writing boss and o love the presentation as well. Please do keep it up

Thank you so much my friend

 3 years ago 

Hello @davidfar, even if everyone forgets about one of us, there will always be something in us that lights up so that they can remind us how we really are.

Thanks for reply my friend, yes exactly, I say that in another word 🙂 as the whole universe is full of energies, I wrote you have the energy inside you, so that can help him to succeed