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RE: Club100|| Steemit Engagement Challenge (week 2): Create your original story || 15 percent to Colombia original ||Cafe Terrace at night by @bright6126
Phewww what a story!
I applaud your creativity. I am a story writer and I can say that this story is a brilliant one.
The plot is well align and you delivered.
You also engaged your reader as well. That is brilliant, mehn you spiced it with suspense.
Absolutely great!
What do you think Rina sent to Xavi after seeing the kissing activities?
I would have guessed something like
“You are just like every other guy out there. Scum! It's over!”
But you didn't tell us if they were dating, you just portrayed to us that Xavi loved Rina and stalks her a lot. 🤔
Maybe her Texting him speaks volume so maybe they're dating or not.
Who knows.
Yea! Thanks for reading! I really want the audience to be on suspense and also logically ponder on the the story 😊
Oohhh yeah
I did ponder a lot too haha