It would be good if you write a bit more. I find it hard to believe this is all you do on a day. I read nothing about what a day at school/university looks like. You wake up, pray and that's it? Sorry, but that's not very interesting.
For sure you have more to tell.
Take some time to read the writing lessons of the Steemit Teaching Team #wewrite to improve yourself.
Your hashtags make no sense. Hashtag #about???? Please, check and change them and give a good example of how a post should look like.