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RE: 5 Minute Freewrite: Tuesday - Prompt: what gift do you give to the person who has everything?
Good love story. I like the use of the prompt. These two lines stood out:
I felt the sun from below my eye lids.
...and all the other amazing features.
We can all relate to the sun being on our face with our eyes closed, but I've never heard it described this way.
The second one creates a wonderful space for the reader to fill in the details, and expresses the feeling of attraction. It's nicely balanced with the specific details you provide.
Nice job.
Thank you so much for your kind words and your time to read my Freewrite.
I am glad your were able to connect with the feelings I have tried to express.
Have a great day ahead.