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RE: Uphill – #freewrite 28, Day 1028

in Freewriters4 years ago

Dark things have their place. Lovely.

Thanks so much for appreciating my haiku! It's one of the first I ever wrote according to one method of haiku writing, I can't remember the name, but you look at the image long enough until a haiku pops out. This one did that for me, a lot of time spent with the image but only a few minutes of tinkering around with words.

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I think you captured the essence of the photo, and I like the double meaning of the last line, as either a wish for them or just a recognition of their knowing.

ooh! You see?! You saw something I did not, the double meaning.