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in Steem POD Team20 days ago (edited)

The Gems in the Mud

Sitting underneath
The Rambutan tree
I enjoy my peace
My cup of coffee
I wait for the next wake-up call
The Tsituti is the best of all.

Who will it be this time
Lifted
In the picture
Does anyone still read?
There's no need to
I save myself time and energy

Heart and soul being poured out
Comments will reign
Some posts conquer
Like @Huzaifanveed1 did with
29

Thankfully for the words of
Appreciation
Written by @aneukpineung78
Don't be late

Join the party
Too much love will kill you said
the Queen
So does pie and life
The killer instinct

We feed the sheet
Take it
Eat
Wake up, Steemit
The DJ adds the beat
To make it easier to digest

Awesome we are
The black and the red cats
Climbing the roofs
Finding our way
Not afraid of a mud fight.

It's coffee-time
Sip and enjoy our weekly feed
In the shadow of
The Rambutan tree
With music by @golden-rain


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How about this to start with?

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🙂❤️ I've saved the text, and this will be the first music thing I do in 2025.
Is the lyrics style somewhat like haiku, or did I misunderstand something?

P.s. I think it would be worth adding a simple chorus:
'Wake up, Kitty, wake up'.

 20 days ago (edited)

You can add what you like.

The haiku needs the elements of the seasons, nature, plus the syllables should be different but poetry it is like most songtexts (lyrics)

Instead of wake up.. you can also use:
• under the.... tree
• me and my coffee
• Gems of the mud
• Steemit wake up with a cup of coffee

I go for the muddy coffee 🤣

Humour and a good laugh is what we need.
I leave the text with you and the picture is already yours

inspired by @cicisaja

🍀♥️

Awesome 😎🤩😍🌹 you amazed me again and again.in this oceanic ecosystem full of mist in maze, this lead to laugh in the rain

Pick the coffee bean from @rokhani's father plantation, light the world of monkey business with big wave of motion. Let @yurche use the coffee ground, paint us some winter view off the sound.

With @aneukpineung78 thought of finding excuses to escape, who wants to ignore the mess of shade and shape?

@cicisaja,

A sip of coffee still saved
there is only warmth that I have
welcome the news
give a view

so you come and take your hand
tastes sweet and deliciously indulgent
invited to sit together
while tasting further

there is a sweet smile
looks friendly from hundreds miles
makes your soul warm
as if in the embrace of an arm

a cup of coffee from the garden welcome the tired curators will moisten the barren
with a smile full of intelligence
I'll reply to comments

ahead of the new year
while still waiting here
hope all is full of blessings @wakeupkitty and also with @aneukpineung78

Yaaayyy... 🎉🎉🎉🎇🎊🎊 Happy New Year, this is also beautiful 🤩❤️

Thank you The beauty will come from the heart. Your kind word will always noted

Well deserved!

@ wakeupkitty

♥️🍀

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 20 days ago (edited)

@golden-rain

How about if the song starts with a voice saying...

"In this oceanic ecosystem full of mist in maze, this song leads to laugh in the rain... "

Next the text and the chorus (you can use the same whatever or mix it)

After the song finished the voice (or voices whisper...

"Pick the coffee beans from @rokhani's father,
Light the world of Monkey Business
Big waves of motion

Let @yurche use the coffee ground
Painted view of winter sound.

@aneukpineung78
Finding excuses
Escapes
Inore the mess of shade and shape."

Orchestral? I am thinking something heavy.

 20 days ago 

Let's wait and see what the new year brings. If you want something heavy, you can carry our shopping after we have that coffee time you invited us for. You remember?

Ps. Or we ask Suno to change it into heavy metal

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I don't need excuses. When I want to escape, I just do. 😅😅😅

 20 days ago 

Hahaha... good one. You don't want to escape. Don't sweat I know how to find you.

YOu know I don't need excuses but I will tell you why. 😅

 18 days ago 

You know where to find so you can tell me in private... WHY???? Are you in bed again?

 20 days ago 

This is so beautiful 😭

 20 days ago 

We wait till the song is presented. That will be in 2025.

Ini kata-kata yang indah,

Apa ini sebuah puisi, atau sebuah cerita.

 20 days ago 

Ini adalah teks lagu untuk lagu baru yang akan dirilis pada tahun 2025. Sebagian teks diambil dari komentar kami dan @cicisaja menambahkan bagiannya (atau sebenarnya saya menambahkan kata-katanya). Ini berdasarkan laporan dan nominasi dan gambarnya sudah dibuat sebelumnya dan begitu pula tawaran untuk menggubah musik untuk teks saya (sekarang menjadi teks kami).

Semoga nanti teks ini akan diterbitkan menjadi di sebuah lagu dengan irama syahdu untuk di dengarkan oleh orang ramai

 18 days ago 

Kita tunggu saja hasilnya. Seharusnya sudah siap sekitar tanggal 24 Januari dan kita bisa mencari musik lainnya. Kita bisa mulai klub musik dan lirik lagu Steemit.