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RE: SLC21/WK5: Choking and Airway Obstruction: A Complete Guide to Life-Saving First Aid Techniques
Student Name: @fantvwiki
Overall grade: 9.1
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided what are the changes in a body that causes partial airway obstruction compared to complete airway obstruction. Good work. You're the first user to properly explain what happens inside the body. The point of the introduction of a foreign body in the respiratory tract instead of the esophagus is what I had been looking for in other assignments well done. | A few details are missing such as some people have allergies to some food items. This information would have been nice. You also didn't mention the lack of oxygen in the respiratory tract. | [Grade: 2.3] |
| Question 2 | Outlined the approach of performing a Heimlich maneuver. Excellent work and demonstration. | Not pushes but thrusts. In the video you're not doing the maneuver entirely correct in the gif. | [Grade: 2.2] |
| Question 3 | Listed the steps of managing an emergency choking scenario. Good explanation | You have some clear mistakes in this question. Reread it and you'll find them. Few spelling mistakes and few mistakes in the headings. You also haven't mentioned how to remove the obstruction if the patient has foreign object stuck in this throat. | [Grade: 1.9] |
| Question 4 | The student managed to present an infographic. Infographics in the medicine field serve as important tool for having access to more information in a single place. These are typically necessary to have as a first aider. | [Grade: 2.5] |
General Feedback: The student has shown an excellent nderstanding of this week's course. I enjoyed reading this post but there were a few shortcomings which I'm sure will be avoided in the upcoming posts. Good work
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1
Thanks for the advice and support, have a nice day.