Hello @soloben

Thank you for sharing your diary and your thoughts with us.

Permit me to suggest some corrections on this your diary entry.

First, your entry had more of your thoughts on life matters then how your day went.

I starteed my day with prayer after morning devotion,i started preparing for my office work, i engaged myself with the house chores, i swept everyhere,wash the dishes and make a breakfast for myself and when i was done with that i dashed into the bathroom and took my bath and dressed up for my diary work

This was all you told us about your day. The rest were your personal take on life. Your diary entry should be how you spent your day, as detailed as possible. Your personal thoughts are fine but they shouldn't be more than how you spent your day. Try the ratio 85% (how your day went) - 15% (personal thoughts).

Secondly, it will be nice if you justified your text and neatly arrange them in paragraphs according to points (hope you get what I'm saying here)

Also, you need to use the #betterlife tag in all your diary entries as part of your first five tags. That's the rule.

Lastly, your images are without caption. We don't know what they are about. Adding captions to your images makes them more understandable.

I hope you understand that the purpose of my corrections is to help you write a better diary. This will all but guarantee you more upvotes.

Thank you for your understanding.

Blessings and peace.

#twopercent #nigeria #diarydoctor #affable