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RE: "SLC21/WK1: Empowering Life-Saving Skills: A Guide to First Response and Basic First Aid"
Student Name: @khursheedanwar
Time of checking: within 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [8.1/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Shared a personal experience from a traffic accident that effectively illustrated the importance of basic first response skills. | While the experience was well-presented, including more specifics about how you assessed the severity of your bleeding and the exact steps taken to apply pressure would enhance your response. You might also want to discuss what you learned from the experience and how it informs your understanding of first response skills today. Also, the real question was what would have been different if you were a first responder yourself and how you could manage it next time after gaining knowledge of first aid. | [Grade: 1.4] |
| Question 2 | Provided a clear step-by-step approach to managing a road traffic accident scenario, emphasizing the importance of assessing safety and the victim's condition. | The correct sequence of the DRABC protocol has not been followed. Checking for circulation is the last step, while assessing the airway comes immediately after ensuring safety and danger. Ensure that you elaborate on the assessment process, particularly on how you would check for breathing and pulse accurately. Clarifying your thoughts on moving the casualty and discussing the rationale behind each action would strengthen your answer. Also, calling the emergency is not done by oneself; rather, ask someone from the crowd to do so. Don’t forget to add your username to the images you use in your post. Also, consider adding potential dangers in a road traffic accident and possible obstructions for airway clearance. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 3 | Created a flowchart of the DRABC protocol using Canva, meeting the assignment requirements and demonstrating creativity. | The flowchart is good; however, adding brief descriptions for each step of the protocol could improve clarity. Ensure that the symbols used (✅ and ❌) are explained clearly in the illustration for better understanding, such as when to proceed to the next step and when to seek an alternative. Additionally, consider refining the layout for visual appeal and easier comprehension. Overall, very nice work. | [Grade: 2.2] |
| Question 4 | Listed essential emergency contact numbers relevant to Pakistan, covering key services effectively. | Including brief descriptions for each contact’s purpose would enhance the usefulness of your list. Furthermore, consider adding contacts for mental health support, local helplines, child abuse, women's helpline, national suicide prevention, and natural disaster rescue to improve the comprehensiveness of your emergency contacts. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 5 | Attempted the quiz, showing engagement with the learning material. | 10 out of 10 questions were correct. Excellent effort! | [Grade: 2.5] |
General Feedback:
Your report reflects a commendable understanding of first response skills and emergency procedures. However, incorporating more specific details and following the correct sequences in your answers will enhance the clarity and effectiveness of your responses. Also, please remember to insert your username in the images you use in your post. Additionally, note that you should not invite the teacher (@huzaifanaveed1) for the homework; please keep this in mind for future assignments.
Thank you.
Regards,
@abdu.navi03