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RE: SLC21/WK1 || Empowering Life-Saving Skills || A Guide to First Response and Basic First Aid
Student Name: @neelofar
Time of checking: Within 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [7.0/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided a personal account of responding to a medical emergency involving your grandfather. You effectively conveyed your composure and the actions taken, such as administering aspirin. | While you captured the situation well, including more details about your grandfather's symptoms and the decision-making process would strengthen your response. Consider elaborating on the emotional impact of the experience, both for you and your grandfather. Discussing what additional knowledge or skills you wished you had at that moment could enhance the reflection on your first response skills. | [Grade: 1.5] |
| Question 2 | Described the scenario of a road traffic accident effectively, focusing on your safety and initial assessment of the motorcyclist. | Although your initial steps were good, further elaboration on the DRABC protocol is needed. You could discuss what potential hazards and dangers could be on the roadside and how you would ensure your safety is guarded. Ensure to describe checking for danger, as well as assessing the airway, which you didn’t mention in your homework, breathing, and circulation more clearly. Mention specific actions you would take to check for airway obstruction and to interpret breathing. Additionally, clarify your communication with bystanders and the injured person, emphasizing the importance of clear instructions and reassurance. Also, kindly use your username in the images you use in your post. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 3 | Created a detailed explanation of the DRABC protocol. | You provided sufficient explanation of the DRABC protocol; however, a visual representation, illustration, or flow chart was expected. We have to be creative. The illustration could benefit from more detailed descriptions of each step in the DRABC protocol. Consider incorporating visual elements that aid understanding and ensure you mention alternatives if certain steps cannot be followed. A creative layout that engages viewers would also enhance the overall presentation. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 4 | Compiled emergency contact numbers relevant to Pakistan, addressing essential services as required. | Including descriptions of each emergency number's purpose would improve the clarity and usability of the resource. Additionally, consider adding contacts for mental health support, women's helplines, child abuse resources, national suicide prevention, natural disaster rescue, and other critical services to create a more comprehensive resource for emergency situations. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 5 | Completed the quiz with a perfect score, demonstrating a strong understanding of the material. | Excellent work in this section! Your high score reflects your comprehension of the first aid concepts discussed. | [Grade: 2.5] |
General Feedback:
Your report demonstrates a solid understanding of first aid principles and protocols, but there are areas where further detail and creativity can enhance your submissions. Specifically, adding personal reflections and visual aids will not only improve your grades but also enrich your learning experience. Also dont forget to add your username in the images you use. Keep up the great work in the quiz section, and consider the suggestions provided for a more comprehensive approach in future assignments.
Thank you.
Regards,
@abdu.navi03