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RE: SLC21/WK1: Empowering Life-Saving Skills: A Guide to First Response and Basic First Aid
Student Name: @sbamsoneu
Time of checking: Within 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [7.9/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Shared an engaging and contextually relevant personal story, reflecting an understanding of the importance of first aid and life-saving skills in emergencies. | To enhance this answer, you could explain which specific skills you might apply now with your current knowledge. Reflecting on what actions would be taken in a similar situation based on first aid techniques could add more depth and insight to the story. | [Grade: 1.5] |
| Question 2 | Followed the DRABC protocol step-by-step with a systematic approach, demonstrating good foundational knowledge of basic emergency response techniques. | Consider adding details about the actions taken at each step, such as how you would assess breathing rate and pulse. Additionally, mentioning calling for an ambulance indirectly by asking a bystander rather than doing it yourself would show situational awareness and reduce potential hazards. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 3 | Listed emergency numbers specific to Nigeria, making it helpful for readers to know relevant contacts for various emergencies. | Good work on providing key emergency numbers. Including a wider range of emergency services, such as suicide prevention or poison control, would make the list more comprehensive and beneficial. Adding brief descriptions for each number would also enhance clarity and utility for readers. | [Grade: 0.9] |
| Question 4 | Submitted a creative illustration of the DRABC protocol, which reflects a strong attempt to visualize the process. | The visual could be improved for clarity by representing each DRABC step with distinct and clear icons or labels. Adding visual elements and using arrows to illustrate a dynamic approach to the DRABC protocol could also strengthen this submission. | [Grade: 2.0] |
| Question 5 | Completed the quiz with all answers correct, indicating a strong grasp of the lesson material. | Excellent job on the quiz, answering all 10 questions correctly. No further improvement needed here. | [Grade: 2.5] |
General Feedback:
Overall, you demonstrated an excellent understanding of first aid protocols and emergency response techniques. Enhancing your responses with more detailed descriptions and dynamic visuals will help bring further depth and clarity to your work. Keep refining these valuable skills—they're essential for becoming an effective first responder.
Thank you.
Regards,
@abdu.navi03