This story is really touching. You have very well described the emotions and feelings of the people of Arcadia with "Thera". The story shows a beautiful balance between hope, faith and despair. You bring the story to life through the images, and the message at the end is truly inspiring.

Your writing has creative thinking and great detail, which engages the reader with the story. It is nice to see that you have expressed your emotions and feelings in your words. Your writing style is really admirable.

Best wishes for more success.