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RE: Mixed Emotions : Beautiful Afternoon and gloomy nights

in Steem Venezuela4 days ago (edited)

You did not use the right hashtags!

Your entry has a lot in common with two others I saw.

If it comes to a flashy start it is important that after the title is read the reader immediately reads what that title contains! With you this is not the case. I read the title, opened your post and I read this

Assalamu Alaikum friends. Hope you all are well. By the grace of Allah I am also well. Today I came to take entries in this wonderful engagement contest organized by this community. Here I will discuss some important topics. It's a great contest so I'm very excited. So let's begin.
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Have a look at how posts show if they are all listed and what the first words that come along with a picture! Are these words inviting enough to read?

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 4 days ago 

Greetings, I mention at the beginning of each post how the Lord has placed me and how I am. I also mention what I am going to post next. So my own maybe the 1st few lines of some posts match. Sorry if it's wrong. But I don't understand exactly what you are referring to here, please explain again what I am doing wrong??

I try to explain it again

You wrote something and next you think of what title fits best to your content. You write your title and post.

The reader sees many posts. Your title is promising and invites to read.
Instead of a story the reader has to read through information he did nit expect and which has nothing to do with the title.