#Club5050 | IF ONLY I COULD (Poetry series 1)

in Steem Cameroon3 years ago

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If only I could gather my soul with one sigh. I exhale it for you in a song more seductive than my sadness,

And I would die if I touch your hand and I am not transformed into a mist or a dream or even a sky,

If the things between us are told to the universe or slumber.

If I could embrace you, my next life, to touch my heart with your hands, to touch the homeland that creates in me from your voice,

From your sigh when I say to you: I love you, from your heart made of light.

If only I could dip your hand in my soul or put my soul in your hand.

If only I could extend my life to you and leave. When this morning seemed less bright than I see,

And when everything else seemed to tell me there was no point in being.

Resteem if you want to know the part 2😏

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 3 years ago 

Bro help us understand part one na.. before moving to part two 😂😂

 3 years ago 

What's you guys problem self😂 should i break the bread for your understanding to be enlightened?😂

 3 years ago 

😂😂yes oh break it down sir

 3 years ago 

Literature student 😂😂 for me I don't understand this even if I come across it like 20times

 3 years ago 

Hahaha for the record, I'm a biochemist 😂

 3 years ago 

Hahahahahahaha, I read it 3 times to have a clue, in addition to my background knowledge about the guy who wrote it hahahahaa

 3 years ago 

Poetry has always been something that I find hard to understand
I more like feel it
And I feel you are talking about something/someone bigger than us
Bigger than you and me

Enlighten me please 🙃

 3 years ago 

I didn't even know what to comment cause i actually don't understand the poem either

 3 years ago 

😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
You have to elevate to another dimension before you understand the poem

 3 years ago 

See.
I read like 3 times
Ntx is entering

As i finish this line the next line no d match 4 my head

 3 years ago 

😂😂😂😂😂

 3 years ago 

You must know the writer a little if you want to know how and what he wants to express, the guy has hidden his feelings and will reveal it only to the destinator,

 3 years ago 

Alright ooo
Thank you

 3 years ago 

Hahahaha 😂 then the next one will finish you na

 3 years ago 

Clearly

 3 years ago 

😂😂😂 may the lord give you understanding in Jesus name

 3 years ago 

Hahahaha Amen

 3 years ago 

Wow the lines read so rythmically. Thank you for sharing.i can read over and over

 3 years ago 

Thank you🙏🏾

 3 years ago 

Seriously you'll have to help us
Its like only u understood

 3 years ago 

Seriously you'll have to help us
Its like only u understood

 3 years ago 

This boy na so you di hide talent?

 3 years ago 

😂😂😂😂😂😂 let me be

 3 years ago 

Ambiguous way of expression but I may have a clue of who your talking to

 3 years ago 

A pure biochemistry writing poems 😅😅. Life is surprising ohh.