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RE: SPOKEN WORD POETRY WITH @janicenini WEEK THREE. LOST IN MY LAND

in Steem Cameroon3 years ago

Your write up was smartly written janice i like that , i must also confess from the title of ur work i was expecting a different writeup

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 3 years ago 

Thank you. Yeah with poetry you cant always predict what is there from the topic. Most topics keep you wondering thats suspense and others have deeper meaning. You cant base on the surface meaning. If you check my topic for my writeup in week 2" A letter to the first man who broke my heart" people will think of a boyfriend or something whereas thats not the case.

 3 years ago (edited)

Omo poetry is for the wise o 😂, yes i did read your week2# writeup and was expecting to hear how 1 nigga broke your heart and your presently single and ready to mingle 😂☺
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 3 years ago 

Hahahaha. Say ready to mingle. We go dey oy so. I have updated the poetry. Just added some lines. It has t do with deeper meaning. Talking about clouds and storm.