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Thanks! Not to set myself an impossible standard to live up to, but I also recommend looking up No End House. It's a bit longer, but easily my favorite creepypasta.

Thanks I will check it out.

And here's the first
https://steemit.com/horror/@johnyliltoe/horror-short-story-cattle

Would love your honest opinion. Good or bad, I intend to write more but would love a bit or direction. I've never been terribly good at critiquing my own work.