Hi there, welcome to Steemit and it's great you've invested. This post is a bit too short to be noticed. Here's what you need to do, to have an introduce yourself post that does well (earning money and attention).

1. Explain a little about yourself - who you are, what you've done, your best stories (summarised)
2. Post a photo of yourself (ideally with a sign saying steemit, just to verify you're who you say you are). And also to show that you're a real person.
3. Have a separate post where you have an Ask Me Anything
4. Tell us what you hope to see with Steemit
5. Tell us what you could bring to the Steemit community - e.g. how you could contribute.

Hope that helps! You'll do well here, I'm sure.