You say you're not a writer, but clearly you are. Your post is quite good and honest, so the only thing I would suggest is adding a photo of some kind since I rarely click on a post that doesn't contain picture! I'm a visual person, for sure........Nice to have you here. You'll feel more comfortable with time. One of the best things about Steemit right now is that it's not super crowded which makes this place feel a little cozier....