Not bad at all dude - fire flow and great lyrics! You sound a bit nervous or like you're holding back - that fades with time- overall this was great. I made a short film with some friends a few years ago titled Shadows - give it a watch it you have time.
Thanks bro, for the feedback & and that video you shared, number 13, all the blue + the lights going out, 3 confluence factors I've experienced vastly! What inspired this story? Random imagination?
No problem man - that video is a lot to explain - I went through a very bad illness between 2009 and 2011 - during one of my worst episodes I experienced insane hallucinations / astral projection / I disappeared for months and when I came back it had only been about 20 minutes - spent the next year writing down all the things I remembered about the visions and stories - this was one of them - there are 6 more in the series I'm trying to get produced. No one believes me about the visions but I figured you might.
Love that bro, Can't wait to see the next ones mate where are you based?
Thanks man - I'm from Toronto. You in London right?
Yea its a shame would have been cool to link up in person, I don't really travel outside Europe but if your ever in London drop me a message & I'll send my no. Check my Youtube page if you get chance as well the background pic bares resemblance to your film slightly. Universe88productions.