This is a Jamaican woman’s poem on the relationship dance we all do. But I flipped it, writing from the man’s side in my mind!If you can relate, I appreciate the support and wish all well

in #jamaican5 years ago (edited)

We Could Have Been A Couple
By A.T.Myrie

We could have been a couple
If you weren’t so uptight
If you’d participated in our video chats
I would be holding you each night

But only in virtual reality
Because you are too far away
But I’ve got mad love for you
That’s why I want your pics on display

But you won’t accept my words
You want actual proof
With regular conversations
About crap like emotions and truths

I told you I love you
With a picture of my dick
I want one of you tits and ass
Then I’ll know this relationship is legit

But you are not serious
And I see that now
All the times I’ve wasted
Trying to groom a field
I’ll never get to plow

Digitally or Literally
Because you are so uptight
No one gives a shit bout your tits
Cause you ain’t a celebrity
With your name up in lights

But you blew it and I’ve moved on
I’m still single but waiting like a shark
To pounce on the next lonely woman
Stupid enough to give me her heart

Are you there? Is your voicemail full
Why won’t you answer?
Why can’t you be cool?
We could have been a couple!
If you’d just played by my rules!

Written November 10,2019
10:12am Oba Apt


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Interesting spin from his perspective.... lol people still send pics of them ting , I guess I am old. In the words of di Ras, aka super hype
him fi "move Up"


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Yes mi fren! Yuh still have ridiculous peeps out there!!!

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This poem sounds like it comes from experience...Cats have heightened senses🐱


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LOL! Your senses would be right! Let’s just say a real life convo this morning inspired the poem you see! Ain’t that bout a bitch?

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Lol, btw you may have made a typo, change ploy to plow and there will be better flow.

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Thanks for the correction!! I thought it looked weird but I kept say plow when I read it! Shh... don’t tell anyone!!! LolThanks boo! Blessings

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@nandy4eva, Human beings are becoming so much Materialistic now and Materialistic world took away the pure love from the Human Beings. Stay blessed.

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This is true. We are lost in instant gratification and the absence of real connections. And we all want love, right? We just have to decide on the type we want and can accept. Thanks for taking the time to read my work and share your thoughts. Blessings!

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Welcome and have a great time ahead. Stay blessed.

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Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.


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