Happiness [Poem]

in #life8 years ago

Happiness


Happiness can be the cure
but it isn't easy for sure;
take one step at a time
it may not always rhyme.

Keep everything within reason
for it may not be here next season;
always try your best
and never fail to take the quest.

Happiness always seeks the inner soul
as it always takes the toll;
accept your intuition
for that is your sole mission.

don't fear to seek
as you will never be sought.


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take on step at a time......

it may not always rhymeeeeee

few things bring more happines than a whale vote ^^

Ha - yea, that's always welcomed as well :)

Finding this in the local supermart

also happy.

Happiness is on the side of the one who is happy...))

Nice one @jacobt. If I may be somewhat critical but not in a negative way? The last 2 lines needs 2 more lines to make it a 4 line stanza. Maybe the last line could be something like....Hopefully your soul cannot be bought. :)

Yea, true. I honestly did that on purpose though. I felt it was more powerful. Additionally, I've never really respected poetic rules :/