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RE: Coffeeshop Morning

in #life7 years ago

Hello as a lover of coffee, could not ignoring your article, I do not know but, I feel melancholy in the poem, is it?

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Thanks for reading my poem. I enjoy working in linked haiku - and yes, I think the melancholy you feel in the poem is valid. There is something sad in an early morning coffee shop.