Hello Diana. First time coming across your post and it was lovely to read! However, I'd recommend breaking your paragraphs into smaller sentences for easier reading. Someone once told me, space in writing is like taking breathes or pauses when speaking. Hope this helps!
Thank you! I appreciate it.
As for the paragraphs.... Yeah, I know. Check my other posts to see the difference. :D It was my first article shared with steempress. I need to upgrade the process a little.