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RE: I'm in so much pain.

in #life6 years ago

Interesting poem It wastes a cynicism that shakes and makes one think. The end of it is well achieved, the speech is poetic, but the message clear: hope hurts because there is no way of salvation. The images reveal an intensity of negative emotion
Excellent work with writing, poet.

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So good to see you here, poet. This is my last poem on 7 stages of grief. The next one will be about renewal but, also rife with negative sentiments. :).