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RE: AN EVERY WOMANS DREAM ( ALONG TIME WAITING IS FINALLY OVER)

in #love6 years ago

You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:

Now the dream is finally true, the girl who walk onto the man who waiting to catch and hold her hand to the front of altar and start thier journey as together as one.
It should be their instead of thier.

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ahm i see thnk you for that