|| "Only Mother Knows" - A poem dedicated to my dearest Mum ๐Ÿ’™ ||

in #love โ€ข 7 years ago

When I was in 10th grade, I composed a poem to dedicate to my Mum, and pay the debt for her unconditional Love showered on me. Do let me know your Opinions.

ONLY MOTHER KNOWS

How many days have you cried for me ?
How many tears have you dried for me ?
How many days have you worried long ?
How many years have you filled with song ?
Nobody knows but you, MOTHER

How many times I have hurt your heart ?
How many times have we been apart ?
How many prayers have you said for me ?
How many miles have you walked for me ?
Nobody knows but you, MOTHER

How many times will your heart be glad ?
How many times will you say of your laid ?
How many times you have to listen because of me ?
How many times have you been tired of me ?
Nobody knows but you, MOTHER

How many times have you cooked for me ?
How many times have you sung lorry for me ?
How much time have you spend on me ?
And so that I am giving this life to you โ€ฆ
Though the hours are short and minutes are few

You are my life and
You are my death
Who knows โ€ฆ..?
Nobody knows but you, MOTHER

 ###  Your Loving Son :-  Prem Raval


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    ย 7 years agoย 

    Hi my best friend,

    I love my mother too much and i respect any fellow mate who loves and respects his mother.

    i have noticed that in the 2 pictures she is wearing the same dress, at which between the 2 pictures at least 7 years as i think.

    this is meaning that she is very conservative lady at which this is a good thing in a mother, same like my mother.

    I hope and wish your mother full prospective future with her kids and daughters .

    I have upvoted this post and 3 comments t7of total value 0.12 as to cover your fees and more gifts from my heart to your love of your mother.

    in our region - we have a poet said a very strong poem about the mother, his name is ahemd sahoqi from egypt - middle east , i will translate one line from hispoet as he said :
    ุงู„ุงู… ู…ุฏุฑุณุฉ ุงุฐุง ุงุนุฏุฏุชู‡ุง ุงุนุฏุฏุช ุดุนุจุง ุทูŠุจ ุงู„ุงุนุฑุงู‚
    A MOTHER IS A SCHOLL IF SHE IS WELL PREPARED THEN YOU WILL GET A COMPLETE KIND SOFT HEATED AND STRONG POPULATION

    MY BEST TO YOUR MOTHER, FATHER AND FAMILY

    SAMER

    RED-ROSE

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    ย 7 years agoย 

    PLEASE SEE OTHER REPLIES IN OLDER POST

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    ย 7 years agoย 

    No one can replace mother and that's why says janani ni jode nahi jade re lol, jem gol vina modo kansar tem maa vina suno sansar.

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    ย 7 years agoย 

    Oh yes, I have heard of this Phrase, infact I have attended a session about "Maa Vina Suna Sansar" It got me tears down my eyes, when I heard all the real life examples in it.

    It's so true.

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    ย 7 years agoย 

    hi, thank you for your trust, and i apologize for the delay in the upvoting as one racist member downvoted my service and my reputation down from level 54 to level 40, so i am under huge pressure, i upvote your posts and comments to show you that i am still on my promise to reach 300 to 500 % of your fees as a gift.

    I am still on my promise to return your loan but please give me some time, i will fullfill my obligation but i am now in a very bad position as you can see, i get more funds from my savings outside steemit to become stronger, so please give me some time and you will be happy i promise you.

    once i see a nice picture from your posts taken by you, i will add it to my comments reply back as above pictures to spread news about your good work

    i will keep supporting you, yes i vote with "little" delay but i will fullfil my obligations as really i love steemit tooooooooooooooooooo much

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    ย 7 years agoย 

    I confide in you @red-rose
    Thanks for supporting.

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      ย 7 years agoย (edited)

      Mother knows best.. ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
      Nice poem .. Thank you for sharing with us..

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      ย 7 years agoย 

      Thanks @micch for appreciating my efforts.
      I have been blessed to get in your good books.
      It's more because of my Inspiration from you that I wrote such meaningful poetry.
      Stay Connected.

      || Love you Chim ๐Ÿ’™ ||

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      ย 7 years agoย 

      Wow I'm so flattered bhai, your such a wonderful brother ๐Ÿ˜

      keep on making inspirational poetry cause you have that talent!!

      Love you too brother๐Ÿ˜Š

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        ย 7 years agoย 

        Wow! Nice poem from a loving son... A mother is irreplaceable ...

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          ย 7 years agoย 

          Thanks @tonie.
          I am blessed to be her son. I will make sure to make her feel proud by fulfilling her expectations & wishes for me.

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            ย 7 years agoย 

            You are lucky you still have her... :)

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              ย 7 years agoย 

              Really,Mom is the greatest person in our life.

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                ย 7 years agoย 

                That's undoubtedly true.
                Keep in touch for more.

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                  ย 7 years agoย 

                  mom's knows best for his child always...in return be good to her always ๐Ÿ˜Š

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                    ย 7 years agoย 

                    Thanks Charito !!

                    I will definitely make my best efforts to be good to her & at the same time do everything I could do for her.

                    Stay Connected @sweetcha

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                      ย 7 years agoย 

                      good luck, good boy๐Ÿ˜Š

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                        ย 7 years agoย 

                        Glad to see people who are giving utmost importance, love and care to their parents especially their mom. Nice poem!

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                          ย 7 years agoย (edited)

                          Well, I feel that it is my moral Responsibility to show my respect & love for her for all her un-repayable debt that I am bonded with.
                          I acknowledge your Appreciation.

                          Thanks @long888

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