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RE: Con la sangre de un inocente// With the blood of an innocent

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Hi @graceleon, this is a fascinating post that tells the legend of Gauchito Gil with captivating narration and vivid details. The story very well combines the popular faith and the moral dilemmas that surround this controversial figure. Some phrases could be shortened to improve flow. Putting more emphasis on the duality of his image between the benefactor and the bandit could enrich the story. Overall, this is an evocative and inspiring story of faith and legend. Dear friend well done ! #microwrite

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Thank you for reading my dear friend,
The truth is that the South American culture is very idolatrous and that is why things don't go very well on this side of the world. People prefer to worship characters with anti-values like the Gauchito Gil, rather than worship the true and wise God.

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