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fajrularifst (65)in #microwrite02 • 2 months ago

I have to admit that you've come up with some great images of ants.

When I got into the story, I really wanted to tell the desperate ant that trying to get out of a difficult situation wrapped in a sense of hopelessness will not give maximum results. And one thing I also want to emphasize to him is that nothing is impossible. Yes, our job as creatures is only to try, but we need to maintain trust and positive thinking.

About the bee, he is like a true motivator, who has wisdom and maturity in addressing life's problems. And having a great sense of caring for the ants, I think the bee became the main character in the second story.

Then how about the end of the brave ant, yes I totally agree, courage will inspire and something very valuable to pass on.

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2 months ago in #microwrite02 by fajrularifst (65)

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joslud (72) 2 months ago

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Good comment.

"I think the bee became the main character in the second story."

What can you suggest to him so that this doesn't confuse the unsuspecting reader?

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soulfuldreamer (73) 2 months ago

Thank you for your feedback.

I think the bee became the main character in the second story.

It was required in the task...

Second person: The narrator talks to the protagonist who lives the story. They are different and the narrator seeks to “put himself in their shoes”.

Write a letter of no more than 150 words to your ant, expressing understanding, empathy, solidarity and telling him/her about a personal experience in which you managed to get out of a similar situation.

I would say that while the story is ours, it is shaped by the guidance we receive from teachers. Therefore, readers should approach it with a critical eye and read it 'subjectively'.

Thank you for bringing up this point; it gives me the opportunity to clarify any ambiguity.

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