RE: I write from different perspectives..
Hola amiga, sin duda cada quien le da su toque personal, puedo ver que usaste otras imágenes para inspirarte, lo cual es válido. La historia narrada en primera persona con el zángano de protagonista me gustó, pobres criaturas realmente se sacrifican por su reina, pero le diste el toque romántico, bien hecho ja, ja, ja.
Aplaudo que mantengas a la hormiga en la segunda historia, narración en segunda persona, me hiciste reflexionar en torno a mi contenido que estoy a punto de publicar. Finalmente, en la última historia, mantienes la narración en tercera persona y convences respecto a la difunta hormiga, te creo amiga, ja, ja, ja.
Te felicito, aunque la idea de nuestros profesores es que poco a poco podamos transmitir más en pocas palabras, me gusta lo que has logrado.
I can see that you used other images to inspire you, which is valid. The story narrated in first person with the drone as the main character I liked it, poor creatures really sacrifice themselves for their queen but you gave it the romantic touch, well done haha.
I applaud you for keeping the ant in the second story, second person narration, you made me think about my content I'm about to post. Finally in the last story, you keep the third person narration and convince regarding the deceased ant,I believe you friend haha.
I congratulate you, although the idea of our teachers is that little by little we can convey more in a few words, I like what you have achieved.
See you soon, a hug.
Wow 🤩 I'm encouraged by your beautiful commendation dear friend, you know I started reading other people's perspectives since 3 days ago, and it was a drone that came to my mind, I knew their vital role and short lifespan. And I felt mating with the queen is something honorable and enjoyable at the same time 😝 but juxtaposed, he will die immediately after their dances without even meeting with their offspring 😭 goodness, one can even save him; I was thinking of how they felt in that situation, life between pleasure, and fear of death. They are very courageous because they know their end, but still, they fulfill their purpose. Well, I couldn't help but have fellow feelings. Haha😂🤣 and at the same time learning a valuable lesson from it.
I appreciate your time 😍
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