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RE: I write from different perspectives..

in #microwrite026 days ago

I could imagine its joy of dancing with an alluring and elegant queen; they will be entwined, the ant enjoy the moment even when it knows it will die immediately after that.

After reading this short paragraph, all that could come to mind was the story of “Samson and Delilah”. The guy knew he was getting married to the enemy but yet because of one moment of pleasure , this man just got killed ….

Same thing is now happening to this innocent ant, knowing fully well that if he have sex with the queen, it will die..

What a way to die….untop woman😭😭😭

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What a way to die…. ontop woman😭😭😭

Haha🤣🤣🤣😂 I couldn't help but laugh out so loud with this comment. But Sammy come to think of it, something much kill a man, and the ant's own is even better, a queen 😎 thanks for visiting me today!

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A good comment focused on the story.
I didn't find any suggestions for improving anything in the story or post.
For example: the tightness of the tasks, which makes it difficult to easily recognize where one begins and the other ends.

What do you think?

I didn't find any suggestions for improving anything in the story or post

apologies… I didn’t notice it was part of the task..

Hi @joslud, please I just wanted to remind you that you haven't reviewed my entry yet. Could it be that it slipped your notice since I'm the only one left? Thank you in advance for your response.

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