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RE: Escribo desde diferentes perspectivas | I write from different perspectives

Dearest writer,

Your stories beautifully capture the tension between individuality and duty. The first-person perspective draws us into the ant's personal struggle for freedom, while the second-person view, through the queen’s voice, adds a heartfelt touch, showing a mother’s concern. The third-person epitaph poignantly wraps it up, reflecting on the ant’s tragic yet idealistic quest.

I think together, they emphasize the delicate balance between individual desires and collective survival.

Good luck :)

#microwrite02 @joslud @solperez

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Thank you so much for your analysis, there is so much pression involved in being an individual living in a expecting and demanding society, where things are the way they are, but we wish something else. Everything is valid, so we don't judge the ant, at the end it's her life.