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RE: Of Humor and Love

in #microwrite039 hours ago

Greetings @ifatniza

Task 2: 1.68/2

You have done a very productive and impressive job, I liked reading your research on old telegrams. If that's what it was about, a very concise way of sending messages. Your version of the telegram is a bit different from the way they were written, without so many details, just the necessary information.
But it's pretty good, it's understandable and provokes humor and reflection.
If you want to make any corrections, just ask.

Task 3: 2,84/3

I really see that you had a hard time with the translations, but you did a magnificent job, you capture the essence of the poem and give it a twist by bringing it to a story.
I really liked your reflection and the "exegesis" you do with the characters in it.
Good job.

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