Hi Luna,

What a wonderful legend you've shared! You've already received remarks from @solperez. What I would like to suggest next is simply my interpretation of your translated English version.

I would say, how about this:

The original phrasing "called 'crazy' for thinking" is a bit vague. Rewording it to "branded 'crazy' for daring to think" sharpens the idea, making it clearer why she was labeled as such.

Would you be open to this suggestion?

María Blasa, a sharp-minded woman, was branded "crazy" for daring to think.

Of course, this is just my perspective, and it could be wrong since you wrote it in Venezuelan Spanish, and this English version is merely a translation.

Similarly, the phrase "In a heroic feat she confuses the opposing army to gain advantage and distance between them" could be rewritten as "In a bold move, she misled the enemy army, giving her family and Simón Bolívar a crucial head start." This simplifies the action and emphasizes the impact of her decision.

I hope you don't mind my friendly suggestions. Rest assured, you know what's best for your story. After all, you are the writer, and you know best.

Best of luck for your assignment #microwrite03

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