Hello again :)
You have already received remarks from the teacher, and I don't really have anything to add. You've condensed it brilliantly in #microwrite03
It's just that your story has such fertile ground for creativity that I can't help but murmur these lines in the end in my mind:
A single scream pierced the air, then silence as the wolf vanished into the forest.
I'm in no way suggesting any improvements or changes. I just couldn't resist blurting these words out...
A big, big hug.
¡Holaaa amigo!🤗
No te preocupes... Como alumnos aquí estamos para aprender y este tipo de retroalimentación nos ayuda a mejorar como escritores.
Agradezco mucho tu apoyo... Un fuerte abrazo💚
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V.G.
Very well done. Remember that you are only sharing suggestions, it's not about correcting or doing it the way we tell you,