I love you Zingand(I love u life)

in #mysecendblog6 years ago

Rahul save life of twins of his family friend kids.Ronan Khan and Sanaya Khan when they were 13 year old.His father before he die he give rahul his house key and tell him to move in with his whole family and take care of my kids.Also there mom die when they were 3 year old.Rahul have 4 brothers and no sister.Sameer,ishaan,and varun.father is Big.B mom play by sridev.Sanaya nickname is naina photography and fashion designer.varun best buddy everyone call her naina because rahul bhi name her naina to save life.Mom call lunch is ready call these kids too for dinner Rohan and naina come but naina missing her father and leave dinningroom and sit outside and looking up.God miss my parents now how I can live without them.rahul father say let her cry and leave for well then he say I can't.rahul give her some time. Varun stand up from his seat and if you all don't can I try speak to her and give her food oh poor girl but papa rohan is eating quietly.bhi what happened both saw everything with there own eyes how there father shoot bad guys.oh I see plz leave her alone varun your mom and sister-in-law will take care you don't have to worried about eat your lunch then go to your room.Mrs.rahul take food plate to naina and say have some thing to eat.life so long

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You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:

bhi what happened both saw everything with there own eyes how there father shoot bad guys.
It should be their own instead of there own.