Steemit open mic week 84 - Paper thin - Original song
Hello Steemiains!
This is my entry for this week's Open mic :)
Here are the lyrics:
I don't want remember
that day back in September
had no more hands to play
no final card cliché
You looked for new beginnings
I tried to find new meaning
the bright new shiny wins
forget it all
but I heard
every word
unspoken
I gave myself away
took all that I could
and then I heard
every word
in silence
I lost myself within
my skin was paper thin...
Not many tears have fallen
not many memories remain
so many pieces lost
so many lives uncrossed
My pride behind the fences
I reap the consequences
I try to reach outside
but still I hide
And I heard
every word
unspoken
I gave myself away
took all that I could
and then I heard
every word
in silence
I lost myself within
my skin was paper thin...
I'm sooo excited to finally be able to share this! I've been absent from open mic for a while now, mostly because of time constraints but also because I've been having a difficult time writing music lately.
A couple weeks ago I managed to write this song, but I wanted to record it using loops, so I had to take some time to work out how to make it sound cool. Finally, I finished this at 5 AM and so, here it is :) I hope you enjoy it!!
I'll see you on my next post!
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Cool!! Thank you so much @scuzzy!!! :D
Great one from you again. I still remain a fan. Loved the beatboxing.
Hey @papaudeme!
Thank you so much! :)
I'm really happy you think so hehe
This is beautiful Luis. I even heard it more than once. Great come back!
Hey @gabyoraa!
Thank you so much! :D
You listening more than once makes me really really happy! :)
Ay, Luchito querido, qué ganas me dan a veces de darte una bofetada! Jajaja muy nice
Jajajaja por que?
Great one we gonna see talented composers that are on steemit through this contest 👍
Thank you! I agree, there are a lot of very talented people on open mic, which is why it is so inspiring!!
That's nice
BRU-BRU-TAL my friend,.,.,.,.,.,.,
Thank you so much @grgmm!!! :)
Beautiful. Lot of love to you Luis!
Hey @chaifm!!
Thank you so much!!
Lot of love to you as well!!
I'm really glad you liked it :)
What a great entry!Good luck. Sounds amazing! Upvoted :)
Hey @crystalpachecho30!! Thank you so much!:)
That's a nice song you have written over there :)
Hey @blackliberal! Thank you so much! I tried very hard to make it so! :)
thanks for sharing this amazing song on tthe whaleshares curation show :)
Hey @prfm! Thank you so much for the compliments! :) I loved playing it live for you guys! Hehe