OpenMic Songwriters Challenge Week 3: "Stolen Soul" original music by @senzenfrenz
Here is my new entry for the current week of Steemit Openmic Songwriting Challenge! The motto is "Stolen soul", as titles my new song.
Hier kommt mein Beitrag zur Steemit Openmic Songwriting Challenge. Das Motto lautet "Stolen Soul", so heißt auch mein neuer Song.
All needed information is provided within in the video, if you want to quit that jump to 2:09.
Alle nötigen Erklärungen sind im Video enthalten, wenn ihr sie überspringen möchtet geht zu 2:09.
I hope you like it although it is not live played, really impossible to do on a splitscreen setup.
Ich hoffe euch gefällt der Song obwohl er nicht live gespielt ist, einfach unmöglich hiervon ein Multisplitscreen Video zu machen.
„Stolen Soul“
Verse 1
Get yourself some mental state
where you can imagine your dreams.
Now you can put aside your fate,
imagine things you want to eliminate
All those pictures that you saw.
Some of the things you've done so far.
Feeling bad, choises you made, words you said, bills you've paid, friendships that failed,
those were betrayed, lies lies lies lies!
Chorus
My stolen soul you don't need desire
My heart of stone you smother burning fire
I want to feel the love I used to know
My stolen soul
(Riff)
Verse 2
Future lies behind the past.
After winning you become last.
Ending is no new beginning,
soon your broken bells are ringing.
Life becomes a metaphor.
Virginity is now a whore.
Love is pain, vasted your game, just the same, mess up your brain, you're to blame, all invain,
ring ring ring ring
Chorus
Fugue
One of my favourite songs of all your compositions! I'd like to record it with you as a full rock/metal arrangement :-)
Thank you my dear friend, I appreciate your words! Yes that kind of arrangement might suit the song very well, but might be alot og work, but perhaps we will find some time to do it;)
i loved it! ♥ i use cubase too (learning )
So creative what you did! !
uovoted! ♥ love the chorus!
Thank you very much!
You are very welcome ;)
Very cool ! You made a huge project out of it, with an amazing result!
When I listen to it I strangely thought that this would make an awesome Scorpions song. Maybe it's your way of singing in this.
Thank you @geenaizzy!
Love the composition and harmonies.
Thank you @luzypher!
@senzenfrenz, I very much appreciate you taking the time to explain exactly how and why you recorded your rendition of “Stolen Soul” for week-3 of the Songwriters Challenge the way that you did. The intensity and forethought that went into this production are quite impressive as is the finished composition. Great job, friend!
hey @passion-ground, thank you very much for your detailed reply and support. I highly appreciate how consistently you review all the stuff we load up, even when you were not an openmic judge, yet. I am honored by your judgement!
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