Constance - a Freewrite Poem

in #palnet5 years ago (edited)

A well gone deep,
warm amber eyes far reaching
the moon within their grasp.
Earth lies in them;
a mirror betrays, then
dusk becomes sunset.
The world reflects its colors
the light o'er shadows dark.
Amid sorrow, between
joy, a footfall
stays all noise
Peace pervades, falters
standing on a precipice
silent as a statue
a picturesque device
for nothing is before them
though all can hear their voice.

SRC@MarinaVitale5

Today's prompt is amber eyes
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Beautiful writing. I loved it.

Thank you so much! @isgledysduarte

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Love the turn out of your poem/story...Am here to deliver the weekend freewrite prompt

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Just pick one from the line
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Do have a wonderful weekend and a happy and Blessed Sunday.

Nice poem. Eyes in photo are beautiful.

Thank you for the kind comment @redheadpei.

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Well written love the poem

Thank you very much @naltedtirt.

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Thank you for the great poem

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