When I took asian philosophy over half the class dropped the class by the end because they couldn't get it. For a one page summary I thought you did pretty good. I wouldn't say that the Boddhisatvas are limited to mahayana buddhism but other than that it was cool. If you check out my page most of my recent stuff is economics related but the earlier blogs have some vedanta related content. I was mostly beta testing to see where interests would be on here and people are more receptive to the more recent postings.