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very fair. i agree with you. I always try to remind people, these aren't models, and we typically have 10 minutes to get shots - weddings are tough.

Aaaa I tought it was a photoshoot and she was a model. Now I get it.

I agree the second one looks off. The edge of the face looks like it is to sharp. I have never done wedding photos before but I imagine it can be difficult to keep the subject motivated. The first one looks almost like it could have been a candid.