The Awkward Cake's Collapse (Original Poem)

in #poem • 7 years ago (edited)

The Awkward Cake's Collapse

Mad wind of magnetism
Blew me away
Static charge building up
You strike me as shocking
Shockingly attractive
My hair still raised
I try to speak English
She asks me if I'm ok?
Awkward cake collapsed
Still made with love
Inside my heart resides intact
I raise my hand and wave
Don't know how to behave
You're like a piece of art in fact
An artifact!
Our eyes connect
Can I take you on a dat...
Some random man interjects
Holds her hand and says
Who's this random man?

Mm... do you like cake?
I bake awkward ones

Created by Burning Zeal. Pain hurts, but love is all that counts;)
2017/07/10

#poetry #writing #awkward #love
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     7 years ago 

    Very nice, Will be looking forward to your posts.

    Up-voted :-)

    RightWithin

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       7 years ago 

      Thank you, I appreciate it. I'm an awkward man, what can I say lol

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