Haiku #1: My Home
My Home
I tried closing my eyes
But i can still feel your lies
The pain is still here.
I covered my ears
But still i can hear your lies.
I cry from sorrow.
You were my first love
And probably the last one
I still yearn for you.
Each and passing day
Has always been the same boy
When will you come back?
Stepped outside looking
Wondering will you be home.
Please come home to me.
Days, months, and years passed
Still cannot move on my love.
Please be mine again.
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Each day, I will publish and share my poems either in haiku or not to improve my writing skills. I hope you enjoyed reading it. Good day!
I like to read about your feeling in haiku. I also started to publish some of my pictures accompanied with my haikus. lets check them, if you feel like. I'm at the beginning, need some feedback. keep in touch, i'm glad that i found you.
Hi @bertokandi! Do not worry. From time to time I will read some of your works and give you feedback. Great day 😙
Beautiful poetic work.
Thank you anna-mi =)
That's quite an emotional work, dear. It is based from your own experience?
Hi. Thank you for reading. A bit fron it is from my experience. 🙂
amazing work . i love it. more please ;)
It sounded different to me or i just really have a dirty mind. Haha anyway, I will try to write more haikus. 😄
hahaha your mind is amazing