POEM

in #poem5 years ago

Hello Everyone ,
Now a days I am trying to write a poem which is dedicated to someone in my life .

Bekhre hai zameen par tinke wo ,
Jinhe jpd kabhi aashiyana banaya tha ...........

Ojhal se ho gaye lamehe wo ,
Mala me piro jinse jiven sajaya tha ........
Chand lamho ki aandhi kaafi thi ,
Saalo ka ishq mitane ko .......
Kahi kho gaya h saksh wo ,
Jise mushkil se paya tha ........

Bekhre hai zameen par tinke wo ,
Jinhe jpd kabhi aashiyana banaya tha ...........

give me some suggestion in comment section which helps me to complete my poem.