Old Times Were Better. A poem

in #poem6 years ago (edited)


Girl playing with a doll by Henri-Pierre Danloux (1790) - Image in the Public Domain

Old Times Were Better

                                   Old times were always better,
                                   my grandmother used to say.
                                   I, a little child, did not really get it;
                                   old times are past, and I loved my dolls.
                                   I thought this,
                                   or a similar thought,
                                   with the words and indulgence
                                   of a four year old.
                                   By the moment I meet Past,
                                   —I think to myself—,
                                   loves are lost and stars are gone
                                   to the other side of the globe.
                                   But longing hearts and youths
                                   look lonesome within picture frames
                                   now that present begins to wrinkle,
                                   rendering memories askew.
                                   And the awry truth of present day
                                   twists my brains and my will.
                                   And I remember, I remember
                                   how I played with my dolls.
                                   Apprehension was a ghost
                                   haunting perennial conversations.
                                   While my dolls chose their drama
                                   to be done by the minute.
                                   Oh, how I amused myself
                                   among elastic characters
                                   among elated souls
                                   of elaborated fictions.
                                   Past has come running to find me,
                                   and I sourly remember
                                   how I played with my dolls
                                   when times were all that better.


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Saludos.
No fue la mejor opción pero lo pasé por un traductor.
Bellos versos que de alguna forma me recuerdan a mi infancia.

Los recuerdos de la niñez, aun cuando sean agradables, siempre nos dejan nostalgia.

Gracias por pasar por aquí, @sandracabrera :)

It is always enjoyable to read your poems, @marylncabrera. Thank you for having posted your "Old Times Were Better".

The action figures that I used to play with, when a child, were Star Wars, Transformers, and Space LEGO. When my friends and I became older, we did re-arrange the parts of G.I. Joe action figures, and use model paint to turn them into Marvel and DC superheroes.

Then we would take them on missions that included putting them on rafts to watch them float in the ravine; if they made it all the way to the end, we would watch them sail away.

You're too kind, @lanniebrockstein

What you describe, I guess, is typical of boys. The kind of relationsip between you guys and your action figures, for example, is quite different than the one we girls have with our dolls; I can't picture myself and myfriends getting together to dress up our oldfashioned dolls and get them in a lizard-drawn or cat-drawn carriage to see them go off to some royal ball. I guess we would try to control them as we roleplay (we would certainly attend the ball, our puppetish firends in our bossy hands). Usually, I guess, fathers want to see their boys manage by themselves, while mothers want company; something similar happens between men/women and their “dolls.”

(I miss your sonnets.)

Dear @marlyncabrera,

Thank you, *Smiles. I hope to make more friendships at Steemit, and to join more communities, before posting anymore of my sonnets that are songs, and which also include the literary videos that I made for them, because I do not want for them to become buried in the blockchain, as my “Trembling Streams” and “Shipwreck’d Desires” sonnets/songs/literary videos were.

From Lannie.

I understand. I remember having read somewhere that Steemit was all about "relations, relations, relations." It is a shame to feel you waste your effort because of a failure in the strategy; definitely, you must save the best for last (or until it is time).

Have you considered joining a community?


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