Odin's Balls

sazbird (64)in #poem • 7 years ago

The snow has stopped
The roads like glass
I step carefully
So as not to fall
On my ass

Winter hit us hard
Each year it gets worse
This one or the next
Will see me
In a hearse

Perhaps it's my time
To visit Valhalla's halls
But if he takes
Me too early
I'll kick Odin's balls

#poetry #writing #funny #busy

7 years ago in #poem by sazbird (64)

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moeknows (60) 7 years ago

LOL. That was funny and kind of unexpected. It made me laugh.

sazbird (64) 7 years ago

Thanks, that is what I was hoping for :-)

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chullbull (44) 7 years ago

beautiful post

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derovict (47) 7 years ago

I'm in love with your poetic articulation. Kudos.

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valorforfreedom (66) 7 years ago (edited)

Odin the god of poems approves

No cowardice detected.

Odin bringing people to valhalla by letting them slip on ice must be a fucking joke up there in the golden halls.

10/10 Valhalla poem magazine

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