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RE: A second poem: expressing my condolences

in #poem7 years ago

Hey bro, I liked your poem. I think you could use a bit more punctuations, but if this is your style than Ok. Poetry is free so don't mind my comment if you don't agree :)

Anyway glad to have fellow poet beginner here. We grow together ;)

Much love, Luka.

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Thanks for the feedback and encouragement. I’m still new to poetry and have lots of things to learn, so I can polish and write better.

Yes, giving feedback to each other can help us grow in poetry. :-)